假定英語課上老師要求同桌之問交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多...

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    假定英語課上老師要求同桌之問交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字元號(^)，並在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多餘的詞用(＼)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

注意：

    1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

    2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

    As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones．We rented a home near a lake where I spent good time of my life．I attended to school to learn a variety of course，and went camping overnight in the woods．My dog and I would go fishing in the lake that I mentioned early．During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on the lake．In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that tall at the time．It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed．This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio．There was no rivers or lakes to fish in at a11．

【回答】

As far as I can remember, grow up in Ohio left many good memories and very few bad ones.

                         growing

We rented a home near a lake where I spent ∧ good time of my life. I attended to school to learn

                                    a                 或把attended改為went

a variety of course, and go camping overnight in the woods. My dog and I would go fishing in the

         courses

lake that I mentioned early. During the winter we will come down at night and go ice-skating on

                 earlier                 would

the lake. In Ohio the snow could be heavily sometimes and too deep to walk in as I was not that

                             heavy

tall at the time. It was not until I was sixteen and moved to California when the life was changed.

                                                         that

This was a tough change for me because the area total differed from Ohio. There was no rivers or

                                       totally                     were

lakes to fish in at all.

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