請閱讀下面文字及圖片，並按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。SoClose,YetSoFarWheream...

問題詳情：

請閱讀下面文字及圖片，並按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

So Close, Yet So Far

Where am I? What am I doing? If you’re one of my 500 friends online, you’ll always be the first to know. My phone and laptop are never out of touching distance, so I’m constantly posting updates on social media—whether I’m having a coffee, on my way to school, watching TV… even when I’m in the shower. I have a never-ending flow of messages and updates from all the people I associate with online.

I live in a university dorm with a couple of great roommates. Yet the truth of the matter is: I feel lonely. A few days ago, I went out for a dinner get-together with some friends. My best friend left the table for 30 minutes because he had to take a call. Some spent the dinner bent over their phones, texting friends online but ignoring the one who sat right in front of them. And the extraordinary thing is no one thought this was rude; it’s just how life is nowadays.

（寫作內容）

1. 用約 30 個單詞概述上述文字所描述的現象；

2. 分析造成該現象的原因（兩至三點）；

3. 請你給 Mark 提兩到三條建議。

（寫作要求）

1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

3. 不必寫標題。

（評分標準）

內容完整，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

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【回答】

Nowadays it is not uncommon to see people like Mark have this sensation—closely associated with so many “friends” online, yet feeling remote from people around them.

Quite a few factors make for this phenomenon, of which the most notable one, I believe, is people’s addiction to their smart phones, social media… in a word, the virtual world. By sharing and updating online, people seem to be most gratified to attract a great number of followers. Meanwhile, they find little freshness in their surroundings. Thus, they are blind to and withdraw from the people and things in real life.

As to Mark’s experience, I feel genuinely sympathy for him. To get out of such a dilemma, I would suggest that he cut down on his time spent online, so that he can hang out with his friends more often. More importantly, step forward first to communicate with others when they are deeply lost in the virtual world.

【分析】

本篇書面表達屬於讀寫任務作文。

【詳解】

第一步：根據提示可知，讀寫任務作文。請閱讀下面文字及圖片，並按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

So Close, Yet So Far

Where am I? What am I doing? If you’re one of my 500 friends online, you’ll always be the first to know. My phone and laptop are never out of touching distance, so I’m constantly posting updates on social media—whether I’m having a coffee, on my way to school, watching TV… even when I’m in the shower. I have a never-ending flow of messages and updates from all the people I associate with online.

I live in a university dorm with a couple of great roommates. Yet the truth of the matter is: I feel lonely. A few days ago, I went out for a dinner get-together with some friends. My best friend left the table for 30 minutes because he had to take a call. Some spent the dinner bent over their phones, texting friends online but ignoring the one who sat right in front of them. And the extraordinary thing is no one thought this was rude; it’s just how life is nowadays.

【寫作內容】

1. 用約 30 個單詞概述上述文字所描述的現象；

2. 分析造成該現象的原因（兩至三點）；

3. 請你給 Mark 提兩到三條建議。

時態應為一般現在時。

第二步：根據寫作要求，確定關鍵詞（組），如：be associated with（與.....有.聯絡），phenomenon（現象），notable（顯著的），addiction（著迷），feel sympathy for(同情......)， dilemma(困境)， cut down on(減少)，hang out with(和......出去玩)，

第三步：仔細閱讀提供的文章抓住要點進行資訊概況，根據提示或關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致、時態等問題。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的過渡和銜接，使文章讀起來自然流暢。書寫一定要規範清晰，保持卷面整潔美觀。

【點睛】

範文內容完整，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當。作者在範文中使用了較多高階詞彙和語法。例1：be associated with，phenomenon，notable，addiction，feel sympathy for, dilemma，cut down on，hang out with等；

例2：Quite a few factors make for this phenomenon, of which the most notable one, I believe, is people’s addiction to their smart phones. 這裡of which是介詞+which引導定語從句，which對應先行詞是主句主語“Quite a few factors”，意思是這些因素中最顯著的一個是人們對他們的智慧手機上癮。

例3：To get out of such a dilemma, I would suggest that he cut down on his time spent online.這裡用了非謂語動詞to do的形式表達目的，意思是為了擺脫困境。

從上述例子顯示出作者很高的駕馭英語的能力。

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