少年智則國智,少年強則國強。根據下圖提示寫一篇英語短文,描述作為青少年的你們將如何成長，並說明原因或目的。除...

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 少年智則國智,少年強則國強。根據下圖提示寫一篇英語短文, 描述作為青少年的你們將如何成長，並說明原因或目的。除了提示中的內容，請你至少再補充一條。

要求：

語言通順, 要點齊全, 意思連貫, 條理清楚, 書寫規範;

文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校名稱;

80~100詞, 文章開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。

As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.

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【回答】

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As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.

Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy/we will grow up strong and healthy.

What's more, developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs, dance, collect stamps, draw pictures and so on. As a saying says. "You can never learn too much."

In addition. I think it's our duty to do some housework at home. We should help do some cleaning, water the flowers or walk the dog. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent and get ourselves well prepared for the future life.

If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.

【解析】

1.題幹解讀：這篇作文要求我們根據提示並至少再補充一條，寫一篇英語短文, 描述青少年將如何成長，並說明原因或目的。在寫作時，我們可以列出寫作要點及每個要點中可能要用到的表達，根據需要將這些資訊進行重新整理和安排，使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫。

2.例文點評：本文時態為一般現在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。文章緊扣題目要點，內容完整，表述準確，語言的表述符合語法的結構，造句符合英語的表達習慣。

3.高分亮點：

短語：build up；in this way；keep ourselves strong；what's more；in addition；live an easier life。

句型：賓語從句I think it's our duty to do some housework at home.

  條件狀語從句If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.

知識點：名詞*從句

題型：作文