隨著年齡的增長,你周圍的事物也發生了很大變化。請根據以下提示,以“Greatchangesaroundme”為...
問題詳情:
隨著年齡的增長,你周圍的事物也發生了很大變化。請根據以下提示,以“Great changes around me”為題,寫一篇短文。
寫作要點:
1. 過去, 道路狹窄(narrow), 房展老舊, 空氣…河水…
2.現在。路面潔淨、寬闊, 交通便利;高樓林立;藍天白雲, 滿城綠樹鮮花, 小鳥歌唱;人們…
3.感受, …
寫作要求:
1.要點齊全, 省略號處須作適當發揮, 但不要逐句翻譯;
2. 語句連貫, 條理清晰, 詳略得當, 書寫工整;
3文中不得出現任何賓實的資訊(地名、校名和人名等);
4.100詞左右, 短文的翅目和開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me.
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【回答】
例文
Great Changes around Me
In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were old and small. The air wasn't fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.
Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. It's really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall buildings have been built in the city. Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the cloud is white birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.
Our country is rich and strong, we are living a happy life. I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!
【解析】
這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語,為文章增*不少,如take place,around me,used to be,convenient for,go out,different kinds of,lots of,most of us,look like,live a happy life,go on,become better and better等。而固定句型It's really convenient for people to go out.和固定句型The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.以及I'm sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!等複雜從句結構的運用,豐富了短文內容,使表達多樣化,是本文的亮點。在學習中注意總結牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章表達更有邏輯*,也更富有條理。
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