下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對學生學業成績評價的新體制，圖表所示的五個方面構成了一個學生的血液成績。假如你是該校學生...

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下面的餅狀圖顯示了某校對學生學業成績評價的新體制，圖表所示的五個方面構成了一個學生的血液成績。假如你是該校學生，請你以“The New Grading System in Our School”為題用英語寫一篇短文，給《二十一世紀英文報》投稿。

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簡要描述圖中資訊；

談談你對這一新舉措的看法並說明原因。

【寫作要求】

不要逐條翻譯；

作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱；

詞數150左右。

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內容完整，語言規範，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

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Yours

Li Jin

【回答】

The New Grading System in Our School

In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.

Students’ test results, which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school, make up only 30% of his final score. Instead, how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%. Besides, teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.

I’m all for the new grading system, which evaluates us students in all fields. By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and can truly make preparations for our future life.

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