近年來，家用汽車與日俱增，汽車的增多對人們的生活有利有弊，請你從以下的參考詞彙中至少選5個方面進項描述，並提出...

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近年來，家用汽車與日俱增，汽車的增多對人們的生活有利有弊，請你從以下的參考詞彙中至少選5個方面進項描述，並提出知道2個合理化的建議。首句已給出，90單詞左右。

提示詞：fast, convenient(adj.方便的), pollution, environment, health, park(V.停車), save energy(n.能量), the burning of gas(n.汽油)

Today family cars are becoming more and more because___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【回答】

例文：

Today family cars are becoming more and more because they are fast and convenient. But cars may bring us trouble, too. As traffic becomes busier, more accidents happen. And the burning of gasoline and the noise of cars pollute the environment. So it’s bad for our health. Moreover, with the increasing number of cars, the lack of parking places will be a big problem, too.

I think more wide roads and parking places should be built, and it’s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars. In this way, we can save energy and reduce pollution at the same time.

【詳解】

1.題幹解讀：該題目屬於材料作文，寫作時應承接開頭，加入提示詞，注意材料要求。

2.例文點評：例文時態主要採用一般現在時，第一段敘述家用汽車增長的利弊，第二段提出建議。敘述完整，語句通順，條理清晰。

3.高分亮點：

短語：instead of；In this way；at the same time。

句型：As traffic becomes busier, more accidents happen.（原因狀語從句）；it’s best for people to take buses or walk instead of driving cars.

【點睛】

做材料作文時，首先應認真審題，看清材料內容所規定的要求；根據材料內容，列出要點以及要點中可能用到的表達，儘可能運用高階詞彙和較複雜的句式以便獲得高分，例如本文中的倒裝句、主語從句等；然後緊扣要點，開始寫作。寫完後要仔細檢查是否有單詞拼寫錯誤、語法是否合理、字數是否已達要求等。

知識點：個人情況

題型：作文