假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有...

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    假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。 錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字元號（∧），並在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線， 並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

       注意：  1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

                     2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

When I intended to tell my four-year-old niece Lisa the story Snow White write by the Grimm Brothers, my elder sister stopped me immediate and gave me another storybook. When I asked if she has told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, “I don’t think girl today should listen to this story.” I was confusing. Later, my sister explained how. In this story, Snow White does nothing to rescue herself. Instead of, she depends on others’ help. My sister doesn’t want her daughter to learn just to turn to others help. She wants her to learn to be brave and independence. That’s why my sister doesn’t want to tell herself such stories as Snow White.

【回答】

When I intended to tell my four-year-old niece Lisa the story Snow Whitewrite by the Grimm

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Brothers, my elder sister stopped me immediate and gave me another storybook. When I asked if she

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has told Lisa the story, she shook her head and said, “ I don’t think girl today should listen to this

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story.” I was confusing. Later, my sister explained how. In this story, Snow White does nothing to

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rescue herself. Instead of, she depends on others’ help. My sister doesn’t want her daughter to learn

just to turn to others∧ help. She wants her to learn to be brave and independence. That’s why my sister

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doesn’t want to tell herself such stories as Snow White.

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知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯