(2019·寧夏吳忠中學第二學期高三年級第一次模擬)假如你是高三學生李華，三月初你在網上買了一件夾克(jack...

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(2019·寧夏吳忠中學第二學期高三年級第一次模擬)假如你是高三學生李華，三月初你在網上買了一件夾克(jacket)，打算送給媽媽作為“三八婦女節”的禮物。但到貨後發現了下列一些問題，請給該網站寫一封投訴信，投訴信內容如下表：

要點：

1．介紹購物情況； 

2．反映存在問題；

3．提出解決方案。

注意：1.書信內容包括以上要點；

2．詞數100左右(書信格式已給出，不計入總詞數)；

3．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to complain about the jacket which I bought from your website. This morning I received the jacket on time, but 　

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【回答】

【寫作指導】　本篇書面表達要求根據圖表內容寫一封投訴信。投訴信寫作一般也是三段式結構：首段表明寫作目的，告知商品有問題。第二段則寫具體出現了哪些問題，自己原來的要求的和收到的分別是什麼。根據圖表可知，本文內一共有3個問題，顏*，尺寸，拉鍊。最後提出可能的解決方案，期待回覆。寫作時，注意主謂一致和時態語態問題；以及使用恰當的連線詞進行句子之間的銜接和過渡。

(精*範文)

Dear_Sir_or_Madam，

I'm_writing_to_complain_about_the_jacket_which_I_bought_from_your_website._This_morning_I_received_the_jacket_on_time,_but I regret to say that there's something wrong with it.

Firstly, I'm pretty sure I asked you to send me a purple one. The moment the mail box arrived, I couldn't wait to open it only to find a red one. To make things worse, I need a size 170/88A while you sent me a size 175/92B, which is too large for my mother. I was really shocked to see the jacket was not the correct size and even the zipper doesn't work at all.

This was not the quality that I was expecting. My concern is whether you will refund my money or have the jacket replaced and I wonder who will pay the postage.

I_am_looking_forward_to_your_early_reply.

Yours_sincerely，

Li_Hua

知識點：提綱作文

題型：書面表達