改錯：ThemomentIsteppedinhighschool,Ihavemadeupmymindtostu...

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改錯：The moment I stepped in high school, I have made up my mind to study hard for the purpose of entering the good university. In the first year, I made a lot of new friends, all of who were so excellent. I felt great pressure during the second year. My scores went up or down and I felt so worrying. I told me that I needed relaxation. Listen to music was a good way. Besides, I would like talk with my friends, because they understood me. We would have some tea in the shop and then share secret. When we laughed out happy, all the annoyance would disappear.

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【解析】1．去掉have　考查動詞的時態。根據前面“The moment I stepped in”可知應該用一般過去時。

2．the→a'考查冠詞。此處表示“一所好的學校”，是泛指。

3．who→whom'考查定語從句的引導詞。前面有of，故用who的賓格形式whom。

4．or→and'考查連詞。up and down“上上下下”，固定用法。

5．worrying→worried'考查形容詞。表示人“擔心的”用worried。

6．me→myself'考查反身代詞。此處表示“我告訴我自己”用反身代詞myself。

7．Listen→Listening'考查非謂語動詞。動名詞作主語用Listening。

8．talk前加to　考查固定用法。would like to do意為“想做某事”。

9．secret→secrets'考查名詞。secret是可數名詞，此處指“分享祕密”用複數形式。

10．happy→happily'考查副詞。修飾動詞laugh要用副詞happily。

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題型：短文改錯