假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文*有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤...

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假如英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文．文*有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及單詞的增加、刪除或修改．

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號∧，並在此符號下面寫出該加的詞．

刪除：把多餘的詞用斜線劃掉．

修改：在錯詞下面劃一橫線，並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞．

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

只允許修改10處，多者從第11處不計分

A person who we should learn from doesn't need to be rich and famous．It could be the person we live with him．For me，it's my father．

I still remember the days when I was child．Although he had plenty of works to do，but he still stayed with me and played children's games with me．With time go by，I'm in Senior 3now．It is me who have no time to stay with him now!However，he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family．How handsome and selflessly he is!I am really very grateful for him．

In my mind，he is not only my father，but also a hero living with me!

【回答】

A person who we should learn from doesn't need to be rich and famous．It could be the person we live with him．For me，it's my father．

I still remember the days when I was∧child．Although he had plenty of works to do，but he still stayed with me and played children's games with me．With time go by，I'm in Senior 3now．It is me who have no time to stay with him now!However，he is still behind me and try his best to make a better life for our family．How handsome and selflessly he is!I am really very grateful for him．

In my mind，he is not only my father，but also a hero living with me!

詳解：

1．and改為or；考查連詞，在並列結構中，and用於肯定句，or用於否定句，分析該句可知這是一個否定句，應該用or．

2．去掉him；考查句子結構，分析句子可知，we live with him是一個定語從句，先行詞the person是live with的賓語，所以後面不用再跟賓語，故把him去掉．

3．child前面加a；考查冠詞，child是可數名詞的單數形式，所以前面要加a泛指"一個"．

4．works改為work；考查名詞，work意為"工作"，是不可數名詞，沒有複數形式，故把works改為work．

5．去掉but；考查連詞，although引導讓步狀語從句時不能與but連用，但可以與yet/still連用，該句中有了still，所以把but去掉．

6．go改為going；考查分詞作狀語，這裡是"介詞+分詞短語"作狀語，time與動詞go存在邏輯上的主謂關係，故用現在分詞形式作狀語．

7．me改為I；考查人稱代詞，分析句子結構可知，這裡的人稱代詞在意義上是後面的從句中的主語，故用主格形式 I．

8．try改為tries；考查動詞的時態，這裡and連線兩個並列成分，前後時態要保持一致，用一般現在時，又主語是he，故try要用第三人稱單數形式tries．

9．selflessly改為selfless；考查形容詞，分析句子結構可知，此處要用形容詞形式作系動詞is的表語．

10．for改為to；考查固定搭配，be greatful to 是固定短語，意為"對某人很感激

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯