假定英語課上來時要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有...

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    假定英語課上來時要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文*有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加,刪除或修改。

   增加:在缺詞處加一個漏字宇符號（∧),並在在其下面寫出該加的詞。

   刪除:把多餘的詞用斜線()劃掉。

   修改：在錯詞下劃一橫線,並在該詞下面寫出修改後的詞。

      My brother, who is Harvard graduate, works  in a multinational company,

The company bid failed several limes in it1 s attempts to break into to  Chinese

market in the past two years. As a  new  manager  on charge of the sales  departmen,

he is trying every possible  mean's to  promote  their  products. Because of

he' s taken some effective  measures, their profits are expecting to rise by 50%  .

I real take pride in my brother. What's more, he has promised to giving me live

thousand yuan unlit the summer   holidays  come. If so, I will be able to go on

varation. How a wonderful piece of news!

【回答】

後加a ,  2. Company 後had 改為has   ’s改為its  ger後的on改為in   use後of去掉   cting改為expected  改為really  ng改為give  l改為when或if或before  改為what

知識點：其他

題型：短文改錯