書面表達假如你是李華,上週日你獨自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請根據表格內容,寫一篇短文。活動上午講故事，唱...

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假如你是李華,上週日你獨自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請根據表格內容,寫一篇短文。

要求:1.參考表格內容,可適當發揮;

2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;

3.文章不得出現任何真實資訊(姓名、校名和地名等);

4.詞數:不少於70詞。(開頭已給出但不計入總詞數。)

Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.

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【回答】

Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.

In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.

【解析】

寫作分析：這篇作文是要求寫一份日常活動的描述。描述一天的行為活動。首先要注意的就是時態，寫作背景基於上週日，所以全文要使用一般過去時，其次要注意各個短語的正確表達方式，最後不能忘記適當表達自己的感受。

寫作亮點：善於分段，可以用首段進行概括*描述，闡明背景（my parents were not at home）。第二段可以進一步開始細節描述。涉及到的短語有told her many funny stories，sang and danced happily，taught her to speak a few simple English words，cooked noodles，had a rest等等，使用短語的時候也有亮點，能夠通過副詞happily或者介詞短語with tomatoes and eggs讓動詞短語的含義更加豐富。文章最後收尾簡潔，用一句話點出了自己的感受，使得文章結構完整。

知識點：日常活動

題型：作文